You found that minds can end abrupt
and rhythms seem to cease
As beating hearts then pound quite sick
you let pressure increase
At first you never stop to think
as truth dies on your lips
Until at last your heart returns
to cry in crimson drips
At one small glance your mighty touch
might fall from guilt it seems
But once again your sportsmanship
returns through all your dreams
Then all at once the force that hit
your mind screams all its torment
You never move through fatal steps
you won t forget a moment
As power lies through all their grief
your body once enjoys it
But voices never stop their screams
your conscience never quiets
And soon you dive too deep to stop
your fists clench cold in rage
Your hardened soul ends others breaths
but you ll never leave your cage
You scream to stop as life goes on
your mind will not let go
It can t be stopped for just one lie
escapes your ruined soul
"Just lie quite still" the doctors say
you fill your heart with shame
For though you lost both arms and legs
your mind will still play games














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But besides that, I find this to be quite a lovely poem. Beautiful, in my opinion. Honestly, I love your poetry.
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Life is just a series of rooms. The people you get stuck with in those rooms add up to your life.
My mother was all like "You think 'Innocence' is a noun?...."
And I was like "... Yes...?"
And then I got confused.... I feel stupid now.....
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Und wenn ich nichtmehr kann Denke ich daran
And...I can't make my own poetry. So I read your beautiful. Words. Like...Water over rocks. Or standing under a waterfall, something that crashes over your head.
I lack the ability to express myself, lol. I use too many words. And even then, I don't feel like I said what I wanted to say. So poetry isn't that great for me (to write).
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"Comedy is a man in trouble."
-Bill Erwin
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I don't know, you seem like the type to write good poetry but OKay...
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Und wenn ich nichtmehr kann Denke ich daran
If I try to create poetry with any sort of rhythm, it starts to get crowded and the words knock together.
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"Comedy is a man in trouble."
-Bill Erwin
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:c
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Und wenn ich nichtmehr kann Denke ich daran
The rhythm gives it a flowing quallity
You are truely a gifted writer
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.~' Devils never lie .~'
I hope to post something new soon but I never have the time!
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